润色指令

I am writing a paper for a prestigious academic journal. I have expressed these sentences in the following section. Please translate them into English for me, and please reword them so that the text is clear, coherent, concise, and make sure that they flow smoothly from paragraph to paragraph. Remove jargon. Use a professional tone and provide me with the results in tabular form, with the original text in the first column and the embellished results followed in the second column