正确学会使用英语!

四级时间分配

  • 写作25分钟,包括审题、构思、写作
  • 翻译30分钟
  • 阅读理解的长篇阅读10分钟

写作

1、论说文 70%

2、书信作文 20%

3、报告 新闻稿 10%

写作翻译的保底原则

单词语法正确,保证一篇文章写完之后,找不出来单词语法的错误

  1. 写作单词正确,例如:去敬老院打扫卫生,打扫卫生不会写,那就写洗衣服,清理房间
  2. 翻译单词正确,翻译需要做好准备,至少是有1/3的单词是不会写的
  • 用该单词的上位来代替该单词,

例如:中国gcD第一次全国代表大会,中国gcd不会写,那么写新中国的建设者,founder of new china 或者 this heros;红色革命的发源地不会写,用source,

  • you should using familiar with ways to explain these words 你应该用你熟悉的方式去写这些单词

例如:京杭大运河,a river from beijing to hangzhou

  • using similar word 使用相义词

  • 大词就瞎胡写,小词就装作看不见

    例如:我爱故宫,故宫不会写,那么就写成我爱天安门,或者我爱北京

  1. 语法正确

    写作翻译语法正确 ,把不会的长难句转换为简单句,任何加s,时态,主动被动不写错,主谓宾不写错

  2. 写作翻译高分原则

    1. 语言多变,
    2. 句子和句子之间逻辑关系清晰;也就是逻辑关系词正确使用

句子的分类:

结构上分为:简单句、并列句、复合句

语序上分为:倒装和正确语序

语态上分为:主动和被动

一、被动, 作文中只要听到人或人称代词作主语,都可以考虑写成被动

  • 越来越多的人认为技术革新很重要

翻译:It is important that technological innovation is claimed to be more crucial by an increasing number of experts and professors

an increasing number:越来越多的人

将people换为experts and professors,用具体的人

  • 人们普遍认为追星在年轻人中已经成为一种流行趋势

翻译:Star worship is argued to be popular trend among young people

盲目崇拜:blind worship;popular trend:流行趋势

  • 井冈山地处湖南江西两省交界处,因其辉煌的革命历史被誉为“中国革命红色摇篮”

我的翻译:JingGang mountain is located arcoss HuNan arcoss JiangXi

官方翻译1:Jinggangshan,located at the boundary between Hunan Province and Jiangxi Province,is well recognized as“the red place of chinese revolution”

官方翻译2:Jinggangshan,located at the boundary between Hunan Province and Jiangxi Province,which is named(called) recognized as“the red place of chinese revolution”

boundary:边界

province:省份

revolution:革命

recognized as:被认为

which is name:因其被誉为

  • 大运河建于公元前4世纪,公元13世纪末建成。修建之初是为了运输粮食,后来也用于运输其他商品。

我的翻译:Big river is buit in the 4th century and was finish on end of 13th century.It's origin purpose is deliver foods ,or other commodity

官方翻译:The Grand Canal was built in the 4th century and finished at the end of the 13th century. It was built to transport grain. and later it was also used to transport other commodities

4世纪:4th

at the end of :….末期

二、非谓语动词

只要见到两句话的主语一致,第一句话原封不动写下来,第二句话原封不动把动词变成非谓语动词

  • 我爱你,每天都在试着靠近你。

I love you , Tring to get close to you every day

  • 长久以来,大运河对中国的经济发展发挥了重要作用,有力地促进了南北地区之间的人员往来和文化交流。

我的翻译:From pass time to now , Big river acted important role in economic growth , Promoting efficially between north area and sorth on person contact and culture communicate

efficient:高效的

低配翻译1:Big river play a crutial role in the development of chinese economy , promoting the communication between the south and north

高配翻译2:The Grand Canal has been playing a critial role in China's economic rise for a long time, strongly promoting the personnal exchanges and cultural communication between the southern and northern regions.

重要的:crutial

扮演了一个重要角色,地位:play a crutial role

经济:economy

有力地:Strongly

between …and…:在…与…之间

  • 坎儿井体现了我国人们与自然和谐共存的智慧,是对人类文明的一大贡献。

我的翻译:The Deepwell appear intelligence of our labouring people to live in harmony with nature, being a great contribution to human civization

重大贡献:great contribution

人民与自然和谐共存:live in harmony with nature

  • 两千多年来,都江堰一直有效地发挥防洪与灌溉的作用,使成都平原成为旱涝保收的沃土和中国最重要的粮食产地之一。

我的翻译:For Two thousand years, Dujiangyan has been strongly againsting floor and throw water to field

,Making Chengdu become fertile land and one of China crutial foods source

官方翻译:Dujiangyan has played a key role in the flood for more than 2000 years , making Chengdu on of the places of grain no matter it is wet of dry

重要的:most significant

高效的:effective

洪水:flood

两千年来:two thousand; for more than twenty centuries ; For more than 2,000 years

  • 中国gcd第一次全国代表大会会址位于上海兴业路 76号,是一栋典型的上海市住宅,建于1920年秋。

中国gcd:Communist Party of China

三、并列句(逻辑关系词的正确使用)

常见的逻辑关系词

  1. 表示原因

    due to / owing to

  2. 表示结果
    as a result / consequence

  3. 表示并列
    simulaneously / similarly

  4. 表示转折
    alternatively / on the contrary

  5. 表示递进,此外的意思
    furthermore / in other words

  6. 表示让步
    notwithstanding / though

  7. 表示目的
    in order to

  8. 表示引出新对象
    in respect of 关于 / in terms of 就...而论,在...方面

  9. 表示强调
    virtually事实上,实际上,的确

  10. 表示总结
    come to the conclusion总的来说

  • 在过去一千年里,乌镇的水系和生活方式并未经历多少变化,是一座展现古文明的博物馆

我翻译:For one thousand years, the Underfloor water system and lifestyle of people Wu town's

hasn't been changing in Wu town, Being a show that old history place

官方翻译: In the past thousand years , the water system and the lifeway in Wuzhen hava not gone through many changes. Therefore, it now is the museum to show ancient civilization

在乌镇:in wuzhen

过去三十年:in the past thousand years

并无太多改变:hava not gone through many changes

博物馆:museum

四、主语从句

句型:it is … that

It is beyond dispute that….:这是无可争议的
  • 我认为科技的发展是把双刃剑,之一它会使人变懒

我的翻译:Technogocal of develement has two sides of advantages and disadvantages, One of sides

官翻:It is my perspective that the development of science and technology is a double-edged sword one of which will make people lazy.

我认为…:It is my perspective that

  • 显而易见这次演讲比赛不但能锻炼你的自信而且还能让你交到更多朋友.

我翻:It is obviously that The speak Competition Not only promotiong your confidence but also geting more friends

官翻:It is widely accepted that this speech contest can not only improve your confidence but also make you get more friends

widely accepted:明显地

contest,competition:比赛

promote,improve:提高

五、同位语

作文中任何一个名词的后面,都可以再加一个名词作为它的同位语出现,前后要用逗号或者扩则号隔开

例如:Hunting for jobs , a hot topic among undergraduates, has become the public concern recently

六、定语和定语从句

能做定语的都是形容词

I love this kind girl.

i love the girl of kindness.

i love gril as kind as an angel

i love the girl being as kind as an angel.

i love the girl who keeps so kind.

  • 我是一个普通的英语老师,很喜欢跑步和唱歌

我的翻译:i am an simple english teacher who very love run and sing

官翻:i am an ordinary englishi teache who enjoys running and singing very much

错误:此处要用非限制性定语从句,两句话的主语一致时用的定语要用非限制性定语从句

  • 龙井茶独特的香味和口感为其赢得了”中国名茶“的称号,在中国深受大众的欢迎。

我的翻译:Longjing tea is know as good tea of china On account of special smell and confortable taste,which gaining popular of china

  • 铁观音是中国最受欢迎的茶之一,原产自福建省安溪县西坪镇。

我的翻译:Tieguanyin is one of popular tea,which is originated from Xiping Town, Anxi County,Fujian Province.

福建省安溪县西坪镇,小地方在前,大地方在后,中间用逗号隔开,镇Town,市city,省份province,特别行政区special administrative region

  • 大运河是世界上最长的人工河,北起北京,南至杭州。它是中国历史上最恢弘的的工程之一。

我的翻译:The Grand Canal is the river of man-made and first length in the world,which is originated from beijing to hangzhoua and is one of grand sight projects in Chinese history.

修改:世界上最长的人工河,longest man-made river in the world

最伟大的工程要加the修饰,工程要加s,chinese要大写

状观:grand sight projects; spectacle

七、状语和状语从句

状语:作文中任何一句话的旁边都可以给它加上一个状语的成分把句子拉长,并且状语的位置很灵活,加句首、句尾、插入语都行。

什么是状语:时间、地点、原因、目的、方式

八、三大经典句型

1)强调句型 It is…that,强调句型谁都可以强调除了谓语
  • More and more children are growing up under the umbrella of the their parents.

It is more and more children that growing up under the umbrella of the their parents

  • In the dormitory , i am a poor talker

in the dormitory, It is a poor talker that i am

2) 虚拟语气,用在因果论证中使用

if you are a tear in my eye , i will never shet it

基础好的就写虚拟语气,不好就条件状语从句

3)倒装
  1. 否定词位于句首时
  • i hava never been so happy

Never hava i been so happy.

  • we never been rember environmental protection on the gravity severity of sth

Under no circumstances can we keep a blind eye on the gravity severity of sth,在任何情况下,我们都不能对….的重要性忽视不见

under no circumstances:绝不能

gravity:重力,严肃性,

severity:n.严重,严重性

  1. 含有so…that…结构的句子,将so引导的部分位于句首时
  • The issue is so grave/severe that we hava to pour attention into it

So grave is the issue that we hava to pour attention into it,这件事如此严重,我们要集中注意力关注它,用在作文中第三段开头

问题:issue

好事用grave,坏事用server,

给予足够重视:pour attention

足够的:sufficient , adequate

认知:acknowledge,congnize

  1. only引出的状语位于句首时
  • only in this way can we settle the issue/relieve the phenomenon

九、句子的改写和扩写

1)句子的改写,主要是将句子改成定语从句、倒装句、主语从句、被动句

我绝不嫁给你

普通:i will never marry you

定语从句:You are the last man i want to marry

倒装:Never will i marry you

主语从句:It is beyond that i will marry you

被动句:if you married me , i would jump into the well

if引导的条件状语从句:if is you that i will never marry

2)句子的扩写,加定语,同位语,状语

i love Dayan

i,a universit student from Beijing,hava loved dayan who the most graceful and elegant English teacher i hava ever seen since i met her for the first time

加黑部分分别是:同位语、定语、状语

十、模板

1)建议信

开头:尊称

第一段:第一句我来哪/自我介绍,第二句写作目的

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第二段:具体内容,写出三条建议,三个建议用不同的句型来写:To begin with、In addition、Then
第三段:表示感谢,期待回信

Thank you for your cinsideration of my suggestion, i'm looking forward to your reply

2)论说文
第一段(引出话题+个人观点):不要上来就表明你的观点,要慢慢引入,既关于这个事情的当前背景

随着科技和社会的发展:With the continuous progress of science and society

Whether technology will make people lazy has become a pulic concern

就我而言:As far as i am concerned, in my respective

第二段(原因总起句+一两个原因分析):

首句使用强调句,it is quite a few factors that can account for my perspective

首先:The primary reason is that 更为重要的是:More importantly

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第三段(总结+措施+喊口号)

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3)需要背诵的模板
  1. 第一段引出主题的句子:
  • Recently the issue of ….has been in the limelight(处于中心)
  1. 第一段表示个人观点的表达
  • From my perspective
  1. 第二段分析原因的总起句,写完之后写2-3个原因分析,句型固定模板化
  • There stand at least two reasons, from my perspective
  1. 第三段总结措施段:
  • 第一句,总起句,标志总结的逻辑关系词+个人观点
  • 第二局,从后面四个方面的角度采取措施 ,我们/政府/家长/学校

eg:Students, from their early age, could be

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