中考英语优秀范文-015 My Favourite Great Book 我最喜欢的名著

1 写作要求

请以“My Favourite Great Book”为题, 根据下面的问题写一篇80个词左右的短文, 注意适当表达自己的看法。

1 Who is the writer of the great book?

2 What is the main idea of the book?

3 Who are the important characters?

4 What’s the theme of the story?

2 优秀范文

My Favourite Great Book

My favourite great book is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer by Mark Twain.

Tom Sawyer is a lively and clever boy. He lives with his aunt Polly. His aunt is strict with him, so he runs to an island in the middle of the Mississippi River with two friends, Huck and Joe. With Huck, he goes looking for treasure; with Becky, he gets lost in a cave. And finally Tom and Huck find a box of gold. Tom is the hero of the story, but there are other important characters. Becky is pretty with fair hair. Huck is Tom’s best friend, and Injun Joe is the bad man of the story.

The theme of the story is to do with children growing up and becoming more serious.

3 翻译、句子结构

My favourite great book is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer by Mark Twain.
我最喜欢的名著是马克·吐温的《汤姆·索亚历险记》。
主语：My favourite great book
谓语：is
表语：The Adventures of Tom Sawyer by Mark Twain
Tom Sawyer is a lively and clever boy.
汤姆·索亚是一个活泼聪明的男孩。
主语：Tom Sawyer
谓语：is
表语：a lively and clever boy
He lives with his aunt Polly.
他和波莉姨妈住在一起。
主语：He
谓语：lives
状语：with his aunt Polly
His aunt is strict with him, so he runs to an island in the middle of the Mississippi River with two friends, Huck and Joe.
他的姨妈对他很严格，所以他和两个朋友哈克和乔一起跑到密西西比河中央的一个岛上。
主语：His aunt
谓语：is
表语：strict with him
结果状语从句：so he runs to an island in the middle of the Mississippi River with two friends, Huck and Joe
With Huck, he goes looking for treasure; with Becky, he gets lost in a cave.
他和哈克一起去寻宝；他和贝基在山洞里迷路了。
主语：he
谓语：goes looking for treasure；gets lost
状语：With Huck；with Becky
宾语：treasure；a cave
And finally Tom and Huck find a box of gold.
最后，汤姆和哈克找到了一箱金子。
主语：Tom and Huck
谓语：find
宾语：a box of gold
Tom is the hero of the story, but there are other important characters.
汤姆是故事的主角，但还有其他重要的人物。
主语：Tom
谓语：is
表语：the hero of the story
转折状语从句：but there are other important characters
Becky is pretty with fair hair.
贝基长得很漂亮，有一头金发。
主语：Becky
谓语：is
表语：pretty
定语：with fair hair
Huck is Tom’s best friend, and Injun Joe is the bad man of the story.
哈克是汤姆最好的朋友，而印第安·乔是故事中的反派。
主语：Huck
谓语：is
表语：Tom’s best friend
并列句：Injun Joe is the bad man of the story
The theme of the story is to do with children growing up and becoming more serious.
故事的主题是关于孩子们的成长和变得越来越严肃。
主语：The theme of the story
谓语：is
表语：to do with children growing up and becoming more serious

4 句子逻辑

第一句介绍了作者最喜欢的书。
第二句至第四句描述了主角汤姆·索亚的基本情况和背景。
第五句至第七句讲述了汤姆在故事中的主要冒险经历。
第八句至第九句介绍了故事中的其他重要人物。
最后一句总结了故事的主题。

5 作文点评

优点
主题明确：文章围绕《汤姆·索亚历险记》展开，主题明确。
内容丰富：详细介绍了书中的主要人物和情节，内容丰富。
结构清晰：文章有明确的开头、中间和结尾，逻辑性强。
语言简洁：使用了简洁明了的语言，易于理解。
不足
词汇和句式多样性：虽然文章内容丰富，但可以增加一些高级词汇和复杂句式，以提升文章的表达效果。
深度分析：文章虽然介绍了书中的情节和人物，但缺少对故事主题和人物性格的深入分析。
互动性：作为一篇介绍性文章，可以增加一些问题或邀请读者分享他们的阅读体验，以提高文章的互动性。