中考英语优秀范文-热点话题-传统文化-007 Join Us at the Chinese Culture Festival! 加入我们的中国文化节！

1 写作要求

泱泱中华，万古江河，文化如水，浸润无声。为讲好中国故事，传播中国声音，推动中国文化更好地走向世界，我校拟定下周举办中华文化节活动 (Chinese Culture Festival)。假设你是李华，请给外教Bob写一封邮件，向他简要介绍这次活动，并邀请他参加。

参考信息：

1 活动缘由 (如背景、意义、原因……)；

2 活动构想 (如时间、地点、内容……)；

3 ……

2 优秀范文

Dear Bob,

I am Li Hua. I am writing to invite you to take part in the Chinese Culture Festival in our school.

The Chinese Culture Festival will be held by our school at the Art Center this Friday afternoon, from 2 pm to 5 pm. Since this event aims to help more people learn about the traditional Chinese culture, the staff, all the students and their parents as well as anyone interested in it are welcome. You will read Chinese poems and watch Chinese dancing. At the festival, all kinds of traditional festivals will be introduced to everyone who take part in the activity. Besides, you will have a taste of many Chinese food in order to understand the food culture of China.

I’m looking forward to your coming.

Yours,

Li Hua

3 翻译、句子结构

I am Li Hua.
我是李华。
主语(I)，谓语(am)，表语(Li Hua)。

I am writing to invite you to take part in the Chinese Culture Festival in our school.
我写信是想邀请你参加我们学校举办的中国文化节。
主语(I)，谓语(am writing)，状语(to invite you to take part in the Chinese Culture Festival in our school)。

The Chinese Culture Festival will be held by our school at the Art Center this Friday afternoon, from 2 pm to 5 pm.
中国文化节将于本周五下午2点至5点在艺术中心由我们学校举办。
主语(The Chinese Culture Festival)，谓语(will be held)，状语(by our school)，状语(at the Art Center this Friday afternoon)，状语(from 2 pm to 5 pm)。

Since this event aims to help more people learn about the traditional Chinese culture, the staff, all the students and their parents as well as anyone interested in it are welcome.
由于此次活动旨在帮助更多人了解中国传统文化，因此欢迎所有教职工、全体学生及其家长以及任何对此感兴趣的人参加。
状语(Since this event aims to help more people learn about the traditional Chinese culture)，主语(the staff, all the students and their parents as well as anyone interested in it)，谓语(are welcome)。

You will read Chinese poems and watch Chinese dancing.
你可以阅读中国诗歌并观看中国舞蹈。
主语(You)，谓语(will read)，宾语(Chinese poems)；谓语(watch)，宾语(Chinese dancing)。

At the festival, all kinds of traditional festivals will be introduced to everyone who take part in the activity.
在文化节上，各种传统节日将向所有参与者介绍。
状语(At the festival)，主语(all kinds of traditional festivals)，谓语(will be introduced)，状语(to everyone who take part in the activity)。
从句主语(who)，谓语(take part)，宾语(the activity)。

Besides, you will have a taste of many Chinese food in order to understand the food culture of China.
此外，你还可以品尝许多中国美食，以了解中国的饮食文化。
状语(Besides)，主语(you)，谓语(will have a taste of)，宾语(many Chinese food)，状语(in order to understand the food culture of China)。

I’m looking forward to your coming.
我期待着你的到来。
主语(I)，谓语(’m looking forward to)，宾语(your coming)。

4 句子逻辑

第一句介绍了作者的身份。
第二句表达了写信的目的，即邀请对方参加中国文化节。
第三句详细介绍了中国文化节的时间和地点。
第四句解释了活动的目的，并欢迎所有感兴趣的人参加。
第五句至第七句描述了文化节的具体活动内容，包括阅读诗歌、观看舞蹈、介绍传统节日和品尝美食。
最后一句表达了作者期待对方参加的愿望。

5 高分句型

Since this event aims to help more people learn about the traditional Chinese culture, the staff, all the students and their parents as well as anyone interested in it are welcome.

（since引导原因状语从句）

At the festival, all kinds of traditional festivals will be introduced to everyone who take part in the activity.

（who引导定语从句）

6 作文点评

优点

主题明确：文章围绕“邀请参加中国文化节”这一主题展开，主题明确。
内容丰富：详细介绍了文化节的时间、地点、活动内容和参与人员，内容丰富。
结构清晰：文章有明确的开头、中间和结尾，逻辑性强。
语言简洁：使用了简洁明了的语言，易于理解。

不足

词汇和句式多样性：虽然文章内容丰富，但可以增加一些高级词汇和复杂句式，以提升文章的表达效果。
深度分析：文章虽然介绍了文化节的活动，但缺少对活动背后文化意义的深入探讨，如每个活动的具体目的和意义等。