20200618

i am a senior from the deparment of specialty of fine arts in a university,my letter as a matter of fact,seek to + 抄目的

to begain with, seems my arguement that
not only  but also

the more importantly so that

anther element i must point out here is the 
which has been ignord by numbers children and adults

i suggest you should study english hard.  english for my part, play a crucial in people's communication.therefore, if one really excel in it, she could improve himself both in his careers and his daily life.

these are what i would like to emphsize,and it would be appreciate  if you could grant  me an early replay or  some commemts on my plane.