【写作】迟到的礼物

【原文】

标题：迟到的礼物

今天是小红的生日，但早上我起床晚了，忘记准备礼物。我很着急，因为小红是我最好的朋友。

我决定去花店买一束花作为礼物。到了花店，我挑了一束最漂亮的花，然后匆匆赶往小红家。

当我到达小红家时，生日派对已经开始了。小红看到我，高兴地跑过来迎接我。我把花递给她，说：“对不起，我来晚了，这是给你的生日礼物。”

小红接过花，微笑着说：“谢谢你，你能来我就很开心了。”

我们一起参加了生日派对，度过了愉快的一天。虽然礼物迟到了，但我们的友谊没有受到影响。

【自己】

late gift

today is XIAOHONG's brithday,but i geted (got) up late in the morning and forget make plan (to prepare a) gift.   

“忘记”通常与“做某事”搭配时，我们更常用“forget to do something”的结构

“make a plan”是一个常用的短语，意思是“制定计划”

 

i am very hurry. because XIAOHONG is my best friend.   

I'm hurried because Xiaohong is my best friend.

“hurry”应该是一个名词或动词，但在这里您想要表达的是“我很着急”，所以应该使用形容词“hurried”的现在分词形式“hurrying”（虽然更常用的是“hurry”的形容词形式“hurried”搭配系动词“am”，但“hurrying”在口语中有时也被用作形容词性现在分词，尽管不太正式），但更标准的说法是使用“in a hurry”这个短语，或者简单地用“hurried”作为形容词。不过，最常用且标准的表达是“I'm in a hurry.”。

 

i am going to flower story and buy a hank flower as gift. 

I was  going to the flower shop and buy a bouquet of flowers as a gift.

 

i buy a hank the most beautify flower in flower story.   and then ???   

“I bought a bunch（或bouquet）of the most beautiful flowers in the flower shop.”

“When I arrived at the flower shop, I picked out the most beautiful bouquet and then hurried to Xiao Hong's house.”

“picked out”是一个英语短语动词，由动词“pick”和副词“out”组合而成。它的意思是“挑选出”或“选出”。当我们从一组或一系列物品中选择出特定的一个或几个时，就可以使用这个短语。

 

when i arrive XIAOHONE's home ,the brithday party have been begining. 

“When I got to Xiao Hong's house, the birthday party had already started.” 或者 “When I arrived at Xiao Hong's house, the birthday party had already started.” 

当“arrived at”用于表示“到达某个地方”时，后面通常接地点名词，

 

“got to”是英语中的一个常用短语，它是“get to”的过去式。这个短语有多种含义，具体取决于上下文。以下是一些常见的用法：

 

1. 到达：
   • 当我们谈论到达某个地方时，“got to”可以用来表示这个动作。例如，“I got to the store at 2 PM.”（我下午两点到了商店。）
2. 开始（做某事）：
   • 在某些上下文中，“got to”也可以表示“开始（做某事）”的意思，但这通常用于非正式或口语化的表达中。例如，“I got to working on my project early this morning.”（我今天早上很早就开始了我的项目。）不过，这种用法在正式写作中较少见，更常见的表达是“started working on”或“began working on”。
3. 不得不：
   • 在某些情况下，“got to”还可以表示“不得不”或“必须”的意思，这通常带有一种强制或义务的语气。例如，“I got to go to the doctor today.”（我今天必须去看医生。）这里，“got to”传达了一种不得不这样做的感觉。

 

 

小红看到我，高兴地跑过来迎接我。

when XiaoHong looked at me,she is very happy meet me. 

【修改后】When XiaoHong looked at me, she was very happy to meet me.

【正确】Xiao Hong saw me and happily ran over to greet me.”

 

我把花递给她，说：“对不起，我来晚了，这是给你的生日礼物。”

i given the flower to her and said : "sorry,i am late,this is your brithday a gift"

【修改后】“I handed her the flower and said, 'Sorry, I'm late. This is your birthday gift.'”  \  “I handed her the flowers and said, 'Sorry, I'm late. This is your birthday gift.'”

 

 

小红接过花，微笑着说：“谢谢你，你能来我就很开心了。”

XiaoHong takeed the flowers, smeil said: "thanks,i am very happy that you can come"

【AI】Xiao Hong took the flowers and smiled saying, "Thank you. I'm just happy that you could come."

 

我们一起参加了生日派对，度过了愉快的一天。

we joined brithday party together,  and had a good time a day.   

【AI】“We joined the birthday party together and had a wonderful day.”  

“had a good time a day”中的“a day”是多余的，应该直接表达为“had a good time”或“had a wonderful day”来表示度过了一段愉快的时间。 

 

虽然礼物迟到了，但我们的友谊没有受到影响。

althought the gift was late,but our friendly was not influence 

 Although the gift was belated, our friendship was not affected.  被动语态

【AI】

Title: The Belated Gift

Today is Xiao Hong's birthday, but I woke up late in the morning and forgot to prepare a gift. I was very worried because Xiao Hong is my best friend.

I decided to go to the florist and buy a bouquet of flowers as a gift. When I arrived at the florist, I picked out the most beautiful bouquet and rushed to Xiao Hong's house.

When I got to Xiao Hong's house, the birthday party had already started. Xiao Hong saw me and happily ran over to greet me. I handed her the flowers and said, "Sorry, I'm late. This is your birthday gift."

Xiao Hong took the flowers and smiled, saying, "Thank you. I'm just happy that you could come."

We joined the birthday party together and had a wonderful day. Although the gift was belated, our friendship was not affected