【写作】我的学校

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《我的学校》

 

我在一所美丽的学校上学。学校里有很多教室,它们都非常明亮。我们的老师很和蔼,总是耐心地教导我们。

 

学校有一个大大的操场,我们在那里上体育课,还会在课间休息的时候玩耍。操场旁边有一个花园,里面种着各种各样的花。春天的时候,花儿盛开,五颜六色的,特别好看。

 

我在学校里有很多好朋友,我们一起学习、一起做游戏,每天都过得很开心。我喜欢我的学校。
 

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【原版本】

i am study something in a befuildy school. The school have many classrooms that is very light. our teacher is very nice. he is impaXX teach . the school have a big playgame. the playgame is next a yead, it is plant many flower . the flower is open and many colour. it is very look like. i have many friends in school,we is study and game together. i am very happy every day. i like my school

[AI 修复后]

I study in a beautiful school. There are many classrooms in the school and they are very bright. Our teacher is very kind and always teaches us patiently.
The school has a large playground. We have PE classes there and also play during the break. Beside the playground, there is a garden where various kinds of flowers are planted. In spring, the flowers bloom and they are very colorful and beautiful.
I have many good friends at school. We study and play games together. I'm very happy every day. I like my school.

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posted on 2024-11-21 02:55  张凌赫_帅  阅读(36)  评论(0)    收藏  举报

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