Huaqing Pool

Huaqing Pool is located about 35 kilometers east of the city of Xi'an . Historically, during the Qin Dynasty, as stone pool was built and was given the name Lishan Tang (Lishan Hot Spring). The site was enlarged into a bigger palace during the Tang Dynasty, and was renamed Hot Spring by Emperor Tai Zong, Li Shimin. Emperor Xuan Zong had a walled palace built around the Lishan Mountain in the year 747. It was known as Huaqing Palace. It also had the name "Huaqing Pool" because of its location over the hot spring.
Huaqing Pool was destroyed during An Lushan and Shi Siming Rebellion at the end of the Tang Dynasty. The present-day site is only a small part of the original Huaqing Palace. Huaqing Pool, which we see today, was rebuilt on the site of the Qing Dynasty structure. The palace covers an area of 85,560 square meters.
Entering the West Gate of Huaqing Pool, you will see the Nine Dragon Pool, the Lotus Flower Pool and the Frost Drifting Hall, etc. All these structures were rebuilts in 1959 in the Tang Dynasty architectural style.
The Tang Emperor Xuan Zong and his favorite lady Yang Yuhuan used to make their home in the Frost Drifting Hall. Close by the Frost Drifting Hall lies the Nine Dragon Pool. The Nine-Bend Corridor, which lies to the west of the pool, leads directly to the Marble Boat. This boat resembles a dragon boat, floating on the pool. In the Marble Boat lies the Nine Dragon Hot Spring Pool where Emperor Xuan Zong would take his baths. Every October he would take his court ladies and hundreds of his officials to Huaqing Palace and spend his winter days here, and return to Chang'an at the end of the year. The Nine-dragon Hot Spring Pool was originally built with crystal jade. In the pool, twin lotus flowers carved out of white jade could be seen as well. The spring water wells up from a mouth of a spring, and spouts up to the lotus flowers, hence the name Lotus Flower Pool(the Lotus Flower Hot Spring).
The source of the hot spring that flow into Huaqing Pool and the Five-room Hall, the historic site of Xi'an Incident, are all situated to the east of Huaqing Pool. In this area there are four hot springs. They have a flow of 112 tons an hour with a constant temerature of 43. The spring water contains lime, sodium carbonate, sodium sulphate and other minerals, which make it suitable for bathing and the treatment of quite a few diseases such as dermatosis, rheumatism, arthritis and muscular pain. The source of the spring water at 64

Ladies and gentlemen welcome to the Huaqing Palace culture tourism scenic area in shaanxi province as your tour guide today, its my great honor to introduce this place full of historical and cultural charm to you,
Huaqing palace is located at the northen foot of Li shan mountain in Lintong district xi'an city shaanxi province. thirty kilometers east of xi'an city the history of Huaqing palace dates back over three thousand years to the western Zhou dynasty. It leans against Lishan mountain in the south and borders the weihe river in the north boasting . Its privileged geographical location famous for its hot spring pools. this auspicious land was regarded by the emperors of Zhou,Qin,Han,Sui and Tang dynasties as as temporary resort . beyond its stunning natural scenery and classical architecture . Huaqing palace is also renowned for its major historical events , imperial love story and literary origins among these , the most famous one is the love story between emperor xuanzong of Tang dynasty and his consort Yangguifei. Bai Juyi a renowned poet of Tang dynasty once wrote his moving poem the song of everlasting sorrow to depict the happiness and the sorrows of this love. Huaqing palace is also the site of xi'an incident which occurred in nineteen thirty six during the war of resistance against Japanese aggression. okay dear tourists when we enter the Huaqing palace we will first arrive at the Jiulong lake scenic area , the lake water is as clear as a mirror in the center of the lake stands a delicate stone bridge offering a great view of scenery on both banks. okay ladies and gentlemen now let's step into Huqing Palace , the first thing that catches our eyes is magnificent feishuangdian Frost flying hall , winters in xi'an are bitterly cold , so emperor xuanzong of Tang Dynasty would spend his winters in Huaqing Palace and reside in this hall. it is said the steam from the hot spring pool would rise and turn into Frost when encountering the cold air above. The Frost flakes drifting overhead , created a stunning sight that is exactly how feishuangdian got its name frost flying hall. okay now let's move on to Hai tangtang the crabapple flower hot spring pool , this was an exclusive hot spring pool for consort Yangguifei , and it got its name because the shape of the pool resembles a blooming crabapple flower , the walls of the pool were built with blue stone which is sturdy while the surface is inlaid with white Jade , making it smooth and delicate ,just imagine Yang guifei one of four famous beauties in ancient china once bathed in this haitang tang. Okay ladies and gentlemen apart from these two famous hot spring pools ,there are also other ancient hot spring pools in Huaqing Palace , for example the Lotus pool was emperor Xuanzong's private hot spring pool, the shangshi pool was exclusively for officials in the Imperial court , the prince pool was just used by the imperial princes , the star pool got its name from the fact it has no roof , allowing people to look up at stars in the sky while bathing at night , today these ancient hot spring pools have been preserved as culture relics ,and are only open for visitors to view. however yon can head to the Huaqin palace hot spring hotel on the west side of scenic area to experience the hot spring fit for emperors . Okay inside Huaqing palace there is another attraction must be mentioned that is the palace of eternal life. it was originally the place where the emperor Tang xuanzong and yang guifei make their vow on the seventh night of the seventh lunar month , as Baijuyi wrote in the song of everlasting sorrow ,when one was around in the palace of eternal life , they whispered their oaths may we be two lovebirds flying side by side in heaven , may we be two trees with branches twined together season after season on earth . this poem has made the love passed through the ages . Today the palace of eternal life has become a place for people to commemorate this love. Okay ladies and gentlemen in addition to the natural scenery and the famous hot spring pools ,Huaqing palaces also have rich cultural activities . for example , the large scale immersive historical dance drama the song of everlasting sorrow is staged every night ,with lishan mountain as the backdrop and the Huaqing pool as the stage the through exquisite dances and touching music , it recreates the tragic love story of emperor Tang xuanzong and yangguifei offering the audience a stunning audio and visual feast , there are also many stone inscriptions and culture relics in huaqing
palace . they have witnessed the rise and fall of Huaqing palace and provided the precious materials for us to study ancient history and culture.
Huaqing palace is not only a historical and cultural relic but also a beautiful garden , the garden is filled with lush trees ,blooming flowers ,clear lakes as well as pavilions and towers wandering in it gives you a feeling of traveling through the time and space back to the prosperous Tang dynasty . Okay dear tourists , our tour comes to an end , i hope you everyone can truly feel the historical and cultural heritage here and enjoy the beautiful scenery , thanks you all

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Ladies and gentlemen, welcome to the Huaqing Palace culture and tourism scenic area in Shaanxi Province. As your tour guide today, it's my great honor to introduce this place full of historical and cultural charm to you.

Huaqing Palace is located at the northern foot of Li Mountain in Lintong District, Xi'an City, Shaanxi Province. It is thirty kilometers east of Xi'an City. The history of Huaqing Palace dates back over three thousand years to the Western Zhou Dynasty. It leans against Li Mountain in the south and borders the Weihe River in the north, boasting a privileged geographical location and famous for its hot spring pools. This auspicious land was regarded by the emperors of Zhou, Qin, Han, Sui and Tang dynasties as a temporary resort. Beyond its stunning natural scenery and classical architecture, Huaqing Palace is also renowned for its major historical events, imperial love stories and literary origins. Among these, the most famous one is the love story between Emperor Xuanzong of the Tang Dynasty and his consort Yang Guifei. Bai Juyi, a renowned poet of the Tang Dynasty, once wrote his moving poem The Song of Everlasting Sorrow to depict the happiness and sorrows of this love. Huaqing Palace is also the site of the Xi'an Incident, which occurred in 1936 during the War of Resistance Against Japanese Aggression.

Okay, dear tourists, when we enter Huaqing Palace, we will first arrive at the Jiulong Lake scenic area. The lake water is as clear as a mirror. In the center of the lake stands a delicate stone bridge, offering a great view of the scenery on both banks.

Okay, ladies and gentlemen, now let's step into Huaqing Palace. The first thing that catches our eyes is the magnificent Feishuangdian (Frost Flying Hall). Winters in Xi'an are bitterly cold, so Emperor Xuanzong of the Tang Dynasty would spend his winters in Huaqing Palace and reside in this hall. It is said that the steam from the hot spring pool would rise and turn into frost when encountering the cold air above. The frost flakes drifting overhead created a stunning sight, and that is exactly how Feishuangdian got its name — Frost Flying Hall.

Okay, now let's move on to Haitangtang, the Crabapple Flower Hot Spring Pool. This was an exclusive hot spring pool for Consort Yang Guifei, and it got its name because the shape of the pool resembles a blooming crabapple flower. The walls of the pool were built with blue stone, which is sturdy, while the surface is inlaid with white jade, making it smooth and delicate. Just imagine — Yang Guifei, one of the four famous beauties in ancient China, once bathed in this Haitangtang.

Okay, ladies and gentlemen, apart from these two famous hot spring pools, there are also other ancient hot spring pools in Huaqing Palace. For example, the Lotus Pool was Emperor Xuanzong's private hot spring pool; the Shangshi Pool was exclusively for officials in the imperial court; the Prince Pool was used by the imperial princes; the Star Pool got its name from the fact that it has no roof, allowing people to look up at stars in the sky while bathing at night. Today, these ancient hot spring pools have been preserved as cultural relics and are only open for visitors to view. However, you can head to the Huaqing Palace Hot Spring Hotel on the west side of the scenic area to experience the hot spring fit for emperors.

Okay, inside Huaqing Palace, there is another attraction that must be mentioned — that is the Palace of Eternal Life. It was originally the place where Emperor Tang Xuanzong and Yang Guifei made their vow on the seventh night of the seventh lunar month. As Bai Juyi wrote in The Song of Everlasting Sorrow: "When one was around in the Palace of Eternal Life, they whispered their oaths: may we be two lovebirds flying side by side in heaven; may we be two trees with branches twined together season after season on earth." This poem has made their love passed through the ages. Today, the Palace of Eternal Life has become a place for people to commemorate this love.

Okay, ladies and gentlemen, in addition to the natural scenery and the famous hot spring pools, Huaqing Palace also has rich cultural activities. For example, the large-scale immersive historical dance drama The Song of Everlasting Sorrow is staged every night, with Li Mountain as the backdrop and Huaqing Pool as the stage. Through exquisite dances and touching music, it recreates the tragic love story of Emperor Tang Xuanzong and Yang Guifei, offering the audience a stunning audio and visual feast. There are also many stone inscriptions and cultural relics in Huaqing Palace. They have witnessed the rise and fall of Huaqing Palace and provided precious material for us to study ancient history and culture.

Huaqing Palace is not only a historical and cultural relic but also a beautiful garden. The garden is filled with lush trees, blooming flowers, clear lakes, as well as pavilions and towers. Wandering in it gives you a feeling of traveling through time and space back to the prosperous Tang Dynasty.

Okay, dear tourists, our tour comes to an end. I hope everyone can truly feel the historical and cultural heritage here and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Thank you all!

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原文错误 修正
northen northern
its my it's my
缺少谓语 thirty kilometers... 补充 It is
boasting . Its 改为 boasting + 删多余标点
as as temporary as a temporary
consort Yangguifei 统一为 Yang Guifei（专有名词）
the palace of eternal life the Palace of Eternal Life
the precious materials precious material（不可数名词）
Yang guifei（大小写不一致） 全部统一为 Yang Guifei
Feishuangdian 解释不完整 补上英文 (Frost Flying Hall) 便于考官理解
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打印出来，把改过的地方用荧光笔标一下，重点记忆

分段录音，每段练到流畅不卡再连起来

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祝考试顺利通过！🎉 有其他需要随时说。