作文Men should coexist with wild animals 93.5分
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Men should coexist with wild animals
Recently, there is a heated discussion about whether the behavior of doing an injury to animals should be suspended, the opinions differ from person to person.
A majority of people contend that it is absolutely rational to do damage to animals when it go against the interest of the human.From my perspective, we are supposed to coexist with animals.
To begin with, there is a point of view that food as well as resource is finite while it is in substantial demand both of human beings and animals, it seems to be an irreconcilable difficulty for those who is devoted themselves to address the problem between animals and us. However, what should be lay stress on is that everything, including resource and place, is not certainly belongs to human but ought to be feasted by all living creatures.
Subsequently, there exist a number of animals which is born to be dangerous or poisonous for people that makes it a dilemma whether to blot they out to guarantee man's security or not. We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all living features are created equal, that they are endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable Rights, that among these are Life and Liberty.
In addition, when it comes to the human activities, it is high time that we should minimize the risk of doing damage to animals which is dominant pillars of nature. As a consequence, it is strongly recommended that we should make persistent effort to make improvements to the indispensable activities which is likely to contribute to destruction of animal habitat or extermination of species.
Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that coexistence is the most advantageous and harmonious relationship between human beings and wild animals.
91.5分
Mankind should coexist with wild animals
Recently, there is a heated discussion about whether the behavior of doing an injury to animals should be suspended, the opinions differ from person to person.
A majority of people contend that it is absolutely rational to do damage to animals when it go against the interest of the humanity. From my perspective, we are supposed to coexist with animals.
To begin with, there is a point of view that food and resource is finite while it is in substantial demand both of human race and animals, it seems to be an irreconcilable and formidable difficulty for those who is devoted themselves to address the problem between animals and us. Nevertheless, what should be laid stress on is that everything, including resource and place, is not certainly belongs to human but ought to be shared by all living creatures.
Subsequently, there exist a quantity of animals which are born to be dangerous or poisonous for people that makes it a dilemma whether to blot they out to guarantee man's security or not. We hold these truths to be self-evident that all creature not only becreated equal but also be endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable rights, that among these are Life and Liberty.
In addition, when it comes to the human activities, it is high time that we should minimize the risk of doing damage to animals which is dominant pillars of nature. As a consequence, it is strongly recommended that we should take a series of effective measures to make improvements to the indispensable activities which is likely to contribute to the destruction of animal habitat or extermination of species.
Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that coexistence is the most advantageous and harmonious relationship between human beings and wild animals.
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人类 man, mankind, humanity,human race
人们 individuals/characters/folks/citizen/the public
90.5分
Mankind should coexist with wild animals
Recently, there is a heated discussion about whether the behavior of doing an injury to animals should be suspended or not, but it is well known that the opinion regarding this hot topic varies from person to person.
A majority of individuals contend that it is absolutely rational to do damage to animals when it goes against the interest of the humanity. From my perspective, we are supposed to coexist with animals.
To begin with, there is a point of view that food and resource are finite while it is in substantial demand both of human race and animals which seems to be an irreconcilable and formidable difficulty for those who are devoted themselves to address the problem between animals and us. Nevertheless, what should be laid stress on is that everything, including resource and place, not certainly belongs to human but ought to be shared by all living creatures.
Subsequently, there exist a quantity of animals which are born to be dangerous or poisonous for people that makes it a dilemma whether to blot they out to guarantee man's security or not. We hold these truths to be self-evident that all creatures not only be created equal but also be endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable rights, that among these are Life and Liberty.
In addition, when it comes to human activities, it is high time that we should minimize the risk of doing damage to animals which are dominant pillars of nature. As a consequence, it is strongly recommended that we should take a series of effective measures to make improvements to the indispensable activities which are likely to contribute to the destruction of animal habitat or extermination of species.
Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that coexistence is the most advantageous and harmonious relationship between human beings and wild animals.
92分
Mankind should coexist with wild animals
Recently, there is a heated discussion about whether the behavior of doing an injury to animals should be suspended or not, but it is well known that the opinion regarding this hot topic varies from person to person.
A majority of individuals contend that it is absolutely rational to do damage to animals when it goes against the interest of the humanity. From my perspective, we are supposed to coexist with animals.
To begin with, there is a point of view that food and resources is finite while it is in substantial demand both of human race and animals which seems to be an irreconcilable and formidable difficulty for those who are devoted themselves to address the problem between animals and us. Nevertheless, what should be laid stress on is that everything, including resource and place, not certainly belongs to human but ought to be shared by all living creatures.
Subsequently, there exist a quantity of animals which are born to be dangerous or poisonous for people that makes it a dilemma whether to blot they out to guarantee man's security or not. We hold these truths to be self-evident that all creatures not only created equal but also be endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable rights, that among these are Life and Liberty.
In addition, when it comes to human activities, it is high time that we should minimize the risk of doing damage to animals which are dominant pillars of nature. As a consequence, it is strongly recommended that we should take a series of effective measures to make improvements to the indispensable activities which are likely to contribute to the destruction of animal habitat or extermination of species.
Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that coexistence is the most advantageous and harmonious relationship between human beings and wild animals.
92.5分
Mankind should coexist with wild animals
Recently, there is a heated discussion about whether the behavior of doing an injury to animals should be suspended or not, but it is well known that the opinion regarding this hot topic varies from person to person.
A majority of individuals contend that it is absolutely rational to do damage to animals when it goes against the interest of humanity. From my perspective, we are supposed to coexist with animals.
To begin with, there is a point of view that food and resources is finite while it is in substantial demand both of human race and animals which seems to be an irreconcilable and formidable difficulty for those who are devoted themselves to address the problem between animals and us. Nevertheless, what should be laid stress on is that everything, including resource and place, not certainly belongs to human but ought to be shared by all living creatures.
Subsequently, there exist a quantity of animals which are born to be dangerous or poisonous for people that makes it a dilemma whether to blot they out to guarantee man's security or not. We hold these truths to be self-evident that all creatures not only created equal but also be endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable rights, that among these are Life and Liberty.
In addition, when it comes to human activities, it is high time that we should minimize the risk of doing damage to animals which are dominant pillars of nature. As a consequence, it is strongly recommended that we should take a series of effective measures to make improvements to the indispensable activities which are likely to contribute to the destruction of animal habitat or extermination of species.
Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that coexistence is the most advantageous and harmonious relationship between human beings and wild animals.
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92分
Mankind should coexist with wild animals
Recently, there is a heated discussion about whether the behavior of doing an injury to animals should be suspended or not.
A majority of individuals contend that it is absolutely rational to do damage to animals when it goes against the interest of humanity. From my perspective, we are supposed to coexist with animals.
To begin with, there is a point of view that food and resources is finite while it is in substantial demand both of humanity and animals which seems to be an irreconcilable and formidable difficulty for those who are devoted themselves to address the problem between animals and us.Nevertheless, what should be laid stress on is that everything, including resource and place, not certainly belongs to human but ought to be shared by all living creatures.
Subsequently, there exist a quantity of animals which are born to be dangerous or poisonous for people that makes it a dilemma whether to blot they out to guarantee man's security or not.We hold these truths to be self-evident that all creatures not only created equal but also be endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable rights, that among these are Life and Liberty.
Additionally, when it comes to human activities, it is high time that we should minimize the risk of doing damage to animals which are dominant pillars of nature.As a consequence, it is strongly recommended that we should take a series of effective measures to make improvements to the indispensable activities which are likely to contribute to the destruction of animal habitat or extermination of species.
Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that coexistence is the most advantageous and harmonious relationship between human race and wild animals.
93分
Mankind should coexist with wild animals
Recently, there is a heated discussion about whether the behavior of doing an injury to animals should be suspended or not.A majority of individuals contend that it is absolutely rational to do damage to animals when it goes against the interest of humanity. From my perspective, we are supposed to coexist with animals.
To begin with, there is a point of view that food and resources is finite while it is in substantial demand both of humanity and animals which seems to be an irreconcilable and formidable difficulty for those who are devoted themselves to address the problem between animals and us.Nevertheless, what should be laid stress on is that everything, including resource and place, not certainly belongs to human but ought to be shared by all living creatures.Subsequently, there exist a quantity of animals which are born to be dangerous or poisonous for people that makes it a dilemma whether to blot they out to guarantee man's security or not.We hold these truths to be self-evident that all creatures not only created equal but also be endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable rights, that among these are Life and Liberty.Additionally, when it comes to human activities, it is high time that we should minimize the risk of doing damage to animals which are dominant pillars of nature.As a consequence, it is strongly recommended that we should take a series of effective measures to make improvements to the indispensable activities which are likely to contribute to the destruction of animal habitat or extermination of species.
Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that coexistence is the most advantageous and harmonious relationship between human race and wild animals.
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