W001-健康类001

健康类：paragraph积累

topic sentence： three main factors are affecting health in modern societies

  • support1: the lack of awareness of an unhealthy diet
    • negative consequences
    • is made worse by, the prevalence of, fast food and processed food, be full of, sugar, fat, salt
    support2: changing trend in lifestyles
    • children's hobbies, less outdoor activity
    • adults, less active, jobs have shifted towards, sedentary office work, manual labour
    support3: time-saving technologies
    • cars, elevators, dishwashers, washing machines
    • made people lazier

 

 

 
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