My May Day Journey in Nanchang with My Two Friends (Adapted version)

This May Day, two of my good friends came to visit me in Nanchang. As soon as they arrived, our fun trip started.
On the first day, we went to the Jiangxi Provincial Museum. When we walked in, it was like entering a treasure house. The porcelain was so beautiful. The fine patterns on it were exquisitely - drawn. Some depicted delicate flowers in full bloom, as if they were swaying gently in the breeze; some showed magnificent mountain - and - river scenes, making us feel as if we were in the midst of those beautiful landscapes. We couldn't take our eyes off them. The old sculptures seemed to tell stories about the past. We walked around and learned about each thing. Before we knew it, half a day passed.
After leaving the museum, we were really hungry, so we went to Dashiyuan. As soon as we got there, the smell of food was everywhere. We found a busy small restaurant and ordered Nanchang rice noodles and fried dumplings. The noodles were spicy and tasty, and the dumplings were crispy outside and soft inside. We ate a lot and talked and laughed all the time.
The next day, we visited the Tengwang Pavilion. It looked very grand by the river. The river wind made us feel refreshed. Looking at the magnificent view of the river and the ancient - style pavilions, and reading the profound poems on the walls, we seemed to be transported back in time. We could almost see old scholars in flowing robes, sipping wine, and intently writing poems with brushes in their hands, their eyes filled with inspiration and emotion.
In the evening, we went to the August 1st Nanchang Uprising Memorial Hall. We were lucky to see the light show. The square was full of people. The lights changed on the buildings, and with exciting music, they showed the revolutionary history vividly. We stood in the crowd, feeling excited and admiring the heroes.
After the light show, we were very tired. We went to the 24 hour library in Jiangxi to rest. It was very quiet inside, only the sound of turning pages. We sat in a corner, and the smell of books made us relax. We didn't talk much, just enjoyed the peace.
On the third day, I took my friends to my school, Jiangxi Normal University. The campus was full of green trees and looked great. I showed them the teaching buildings, the library, and the small garden where I used to go. I told them many funny stories from my school days. When we got to the playground, we even had a race. We were out of breath but very happy.
Three days passed quickly. When I sent my friends to the train station, we all felt a bit sad to say goodbye. During this May Day, we saw beautiful sights, ate delicious food, and experienced Nanchang's history and culture. I will always remember these memories and hope to travel with them to more interesting places next time.
AI修改建议：1. “The river wind made us feel fresh.” “fresh” 用词不太准确，可改为 “refreshed”，“make us feel refreshed” 表示让我们感到神清气爽。
2.“When we got to the playground, we even had a running race.” “running race” 表述稍显重复，可直接说 “a race” 。
3. 原文：“The porcelain was so beautiful with fine patterns that we couldn't take our eyes off them.”
修改后：The porcelain was so beautiful. The fine patterns on it were exquisitely - drawn. Some depicted delicate flowers in full bloom, as if they were swaying gently in the breeze; some showed magnificent mountain - and - river scenes, making us feel as if we were in the midst of those beautiful landscapes. We couldn't take our eyes off them.
4. 原文：“Looking at the nice view and reading the poems on the walls, we could almost see old scholars writing poems there.”
修改后：Looking at the magnificent view of the river and the ancient - style pavilions, and reading the profound poems on the walls, we seemed to be transported back in time. We could almost see old scholars in flowing robes, sipping wine, and intently writing poems with brushes in their hands, their eyes filled with inspiration and emotion.