计算机类论文审稿意见的模板

 

 

由于实验室经常需要给一些CCF的A刊、A会写审稿意见，而这些活也都是由我这个小虾米来代笔完成的，为了以免每次写审稿意见的时候都无从下手这里保存下刚收到的审稿意见，这样也好给自己下次写的时候提供一个参考的模板。其实审稿意见这东西没有个模板还是真的不太行的，不然搞起来太慢，尤其是会议的审稿意见要的一般都很急，像什么TKDE、AAAI、IJCAI这样的会议到我手上写审稿意见一般都是限期5天内写完多篇意见的，为了方便以后工作留些模板还是有些用的。

 

 

 

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Reviewer #1: To build a shared learning model for training parameters at the distributed edge to protect data privacy, a novel distributed hierarchical tensor depth optimization algorithm is designed in this paper. The mold parameters in a high-dimensional tensor space are compressed into a union of low-dimensional subspaces to reduce the bandwidth consumption and storage requirements of federated learning. Experimental results show that the proposed algorithm reduces the load of communication bandwidth and the energy consumption at the edge. This article is original and has a unique idea, but there are some areas that need to be improved as follows:

1. Introduction is not hierarchical and logical enough. It tries to reflect the direct paragraph relationship and refer to recent literatures, and some terms should be expressed accurately.
2. A related work section that discuss the contribution and difference from the previous works should be included.
3. The concept of terminology in the paper is wrong. For example, there is no WEIGHT in the pooling layer and it needs to be improved.
4. The reference format is inaccurate and should be revised. If the latest references are too few, the latest references should be added. Finally, the emphasis should be on strengthening language and grammar revisions. There are grammar and spelling errors throughout.

 

 

 

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